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Post by green pigeon on Mar 27, 2006 20:06:40 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]okay hi there I thought of a fun idea that we could all work on. I will start a FMA story and everyone can countinusly work on it, it can be sad, funny, stupid, full of violence whatever you like but you can't reply to this unless you contuine the story. It has to be at least 10 words long and has to make sence with the rest of the story Hope you will contribute okay here is the story:[/glow]
Edward sighed this day was geting worse and worse by the minute first of all he had failed once agian on finding the phiolsepher's stone, second of all he had run out of reashearch funds and thrid he had to go into central to see the corneil. He could already picture Mustang's smug smile and his annyoing short jokes. His thoughts were quickley intrupted though as he felt a sudden jerk forward which could only mean that the train had come to an unexpected stop.
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Post by Saiyuki and Tenshi 4ever on Mar 29, 2006 7:31:29 GMT -5
alphonse looked at his brother."brother, why have we stopped?" Ed got up."i don't know, but i think it's time we figured it out."and walked out of his compartment and down the hall.Alphonse followed.ed climbed to the top of the train and looked around.
((can't come up with any more of the story...if someone can finish from their, i will be totally grateful))
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Post by FLIPPY! on Apr 3, 2006 15:52:01 GMT -5
after looking around for minute longer ed climbed back in where he was greeted by alphonse.
"so ed did you see anything?"
"no nothing."
all of a sudden the lights started to flicker and then it all went dark. ed could here to screams of children and women coming from the other compartments along the hallway. 'now this is starting to get interesting' ed thought to himself. ed shrieked as he felt an icy metal hand tough his bare neck. ed looked up at his brother who had immediatly drawn his hand away.
"sorry al you just startled me."
"its okay broth-," al started but he was cut off by a bone chilling scream that came from the next cart. ed rushed over and slid(sp? hell i dont even no if thats a word. oh well) open the door. what he saw next he could not put into words. it was so horiffying and grusome, slowly he started to back away. he felt cold and his face was pale.
"what the hell is going on here?"
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Post by Keeper of the jeep on Apr 6, 2006 15:19:29 GMT -5
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!" the members of the compartment cheered when Ed and Al entered the room
"Hey!" one of the members of the car screeched,"He's not Mademoiselle I Live In a Can! He's just a midget with a bodyguard!" Ed's ears perked up at the word 'midget' and flew into a rage. He grabbed the man by the shirt and began screaming his lungs out.
"YOU CALLIN' ME A MIDGET!? A 'LITTLE PERSON'?! A 'HALF PINT'?! A 'PIPSQUEAK'?!!!!!!!!!
"Niisan..." Al quietly spoke as he watched his brother's breakdown...
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Post by green pigeon on Apr 7, 2006 21:44:26 GMT -5
By the time Ed had calmed down the hole inside of the train was in disary with many the passengers cowering in fear at the other side.
"Brother I think you went a little overboard this time, you should probabley apolijize(SP?)." Al replied.
"Why should I they deserved it!: Ed said between breaths.
Al sighed.
Just then Ed felt someon grab his jacket from behind and insticly swoun around. HE became face to face with the train enginerr.
"So your the hodlem who's been causeing so much damage on my train." the enginerr said
"Sir-" Al was intrupted as he went on
"Well I want you out of my train NOW!" before Ed or Al had any chance to ague the engineer grabed the wiggling Ed and threw him out. Al had no choice but to jump after his brother he couldn't just leave him alone.
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Post by Saiyuki and Tenshi 4ever on May 5, 2006 6:36:40 GMT -5
ed went tumbling down a hill with Al trying to run after him, and then ed caught himself and stopped. he shot up in a flash."YOU BASTARD!!! YOU'RE GOING TO PAY FOR THAT!!!"he yelled but took a deep breath and sighed.Al looked at his brother"now what?"he asked ed.Ed looked a the train that wasn't too far and started running after it."brother! what are you doing?! the train director kick us out!"he yelled after ed."who said we were going in?"ed said and he caught up with the train and grabbed on to the ladder quickly."come on al! hurry up!"he yelled and Al grabbed onto the ladder after ed climbed up. Ed and his brother sat down,to ride the rest of the way to their location
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